“ I think everything said was actually very reasonable.
But, what about this? what if you added a little content?
I am not saying your content is not solid, however suppose you added a title that makes people desire more?
I mean blog topic is a little boring. You should glance at Yahoo's
front page and see how they create news titles to grab people interested.
You might add a related video or a related pic or two to grab readers excited about what
you've written. In my opinion, it might bring your posts a little livelier. ”