“ I believe what you composed was very reasonable.
But, what about this? suppose you were to write a killer title?
I ain't saying your content isn't good, but what if you added something to possibly get folk's attention? I mean blog topic is a little vanilla.
You should look at Yahoo's front page and see how they
write article headlines to get people to open the links.
You might add a related video or a pic or two to grab people excited
about what you've written. Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little bit more interesting. ”