“ I think everything published made a lot of sense. But,
what about this? suppose you composed a catchier title?
I am not saying your information is not good, however what if you
added a title to maybe get people's attention? I mean blog topic
is a little boring. You might peek at Yahoo's home page and note how they create article titles to grab
people to open the links. You might try adding a video or a related picture or two to get people
interested about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it would make your posts a little livelier. ”