“ I think what you wrote was actually very reasonable.
However, what about this? what if you added a little information? I
ain't suggesting your content is not solid, but suppose you added something that grabbed folk's attention? I mean blog topic is a little vanilla.
You should peek at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create news headlines to get viewers interested.
You might add a related video or a related picture
or two to grab readers interested about what you've got to
say. In my opinion, it could bring your blog a little bit more interesting. ”