“ I think what you published made a bunch of sense.
But, think about this, what if you composed a catchier post title?
I ain't saying your content isn't good., but what if you added something
that makes people want more? I mean blog topic is a little vanilla.
You could peek at Yahoo's front page and watch
how they create news headlines to grab viewers to click.
You might add a video or a picture or two to grab people excited about what you've written. Just my opinion, it could
bring your blog a little bit more interesting. ”