“ I think that what you posted made a great deal of sense.
However, what about this? suppose you wrote a catchier title?
I ain't saying your content isn't good, however suppose you added a title
that grabbed a person's attention? I mean blog topic is a little boring.
You ought to look at Yahoo's front page
and watch how they create news headlines to
grab people to open the links. You might add a related video or a related pic or two to get readers
interested about what you've written. In my opinion, it would make your posts a little livelier. ”