“ I think what you composed made a bunch of sense. However, think about this, suppose you
were to write a awesome title? I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your
blog, but what if you added something that makes people desire more?
I mean blog topic is kinda plain. You should look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create post titles to grab people to open the
links. You might try adding a video or a related pic or two to grab people interested about what
you've got to say. Just my opinion, it would make your blog a little livelier. ”